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tell me what you think i just wrote this today i don’t have a title yet maybe you could help me out =

they ask me 3d why so angy/
I say forget chips i got whole bags on my shoulder barbeque, original, and super spicy/
and if you reach your palms in it/
pull that hand out quick, cuz you might get bite/
and i know the worlds mine but someone else allways claims it/
like in school someone stole my book and put their name in it, makin me pay for it/
the intelligent rappers don’t get the recognition they deserve/
or the dope underground rappers that we have never heard/
and im a big fish in a small pond so i dont fit in/
theres no room for my gills,tail,scales and fins/
so to answer question why im so angry/
cuz the world is mine and when i go out im takin it to hell to burn with me/